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Friday, March 03, 2006

Same Old Stuff

Whatz craka lacking people. Lolz. Well damn people, I just found this poem I wrote about a kid I really liked. I forgot I had it. But I want to post it because I want to get what I thought off my chest and I hope you leave your comments. But before I do I want to talk about how we met. Well I have a cousin that ran away at the age of 12. She came back on Christmas eve 2004. Thats when I met Julio. Thats the guys name. Well he did hurt me bad. But you know what I'm glad I met him and I'm glad I got to spend time with him. But know its all over.

YOU HURT ME BAD
The day we met was so unexpected to me
I didn't think that you and me were meant to be
But for some reason I still felt something for you
I didn't do anything even though you gave a clue
I wanted to talk to you badly, about us two
But I was so shy I did not say a word to you
I told you how I felt inside and you did also
You said you would give it a try, a while ago
Now you say it’s so hard for you to try
But I know you never liked me, so don't deny
If you really did you would've tried
Now I’m sitting here for all that I’ve cried
And I’ve come to realize that you weren't meant to be
Maybe for someone else that isn't me
I know deep inside I’ll still feel something
But I can't just sit and cry wishing for one thing
Which was your love and after you kissed me twice
You respected me and acted really nice
Telling me we would have two kids one day
Making me feel all weird inside with nothing to say
I guess all my feelings are written here
So one day you can read and see how I felt then and there
But I only hope you made a choice that was good for us
Cause I said I didn’t care about what my parents said of us
I would of given anything for you then
Even if it meant given up all of my past but I ask myself when
When you changed your mine about how you felt about me
I liked you especially because you made me feel like something
No one has ever done that to me
But I’m glad me I got to meet you
Even after all the hurt you’ve caused me


Well peoples, what ya'll think. Well leave your comments please. Laters.

8 Comments:

At 5:12 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey sis how u doingz i hope ur doing good orita! and i hope u like being 16 and yupz u kno i gotz lotz of luv 4 ya ur mah lil sis and i willl allwayz b derz 4 u nomater watz wen u need anything chuzt holla @ me kz well sis g2gz lubz ya adios take carez

 
At 5:12 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey sis.... como tas.. jajajaja... im bax... omg... datz sum nice writin rite there... jajaja... believe me i can relate... jajaja... pero rite now im rly happy with how thingz r goin con mi man... n i hope thingz r gud with u n peter... bueno ps te cuidas... gud luck with this assignment...

 
At 5:13 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey mija wat up? I just wanted 2 sa dat ur poem is tight!!! I understand u and I'm glad I got to be there 4 u. I want u to know I'll always be here 4 u! I'm serious!! We've gone through ups and downs but I'm glad we passed dem together. I'm glad that u've moved on wit ur lif! u know u my best friend y mi cuatacha del alma! Lolz...! Tak care and much love!

 
At 5:15 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

it looks like u have some good friends...that's great!
I also see u had a birthday....so happy happy girlfriend!
I liked your poem, it was really heartfelt.
Be blessed k?

 
At 5:16 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

That was a really nice poem. It's a shame u got hurt, but eventually we all will go thru it.

 
At 5:17 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Yes I agree! That is a nice poem. Its so hard to have to go through that type of hurt and like Trina said, unfortunately we have to go through at one point or another. I been there myself on more than one occassion!

 
At 5:18 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

sis omfg eso esta super cute aunke dejo el comment un pokito tarde ps comokiera me impresiona take care sis byez //03

 
At 6:56 PM, Blogger latinachik4lif said...

@ delila
heyz i do lik it lolz n u nou me luvz u 2 n tambien aqui estoy pa ti

@ anonymous
lorena!! u was supposed 2 put ure name lolz thnkz 4 bein there 4 me

@ mexican chick
jessica gurl u been there in mah good n bad times gurl i luv ya u mean lotz 2 me thnkz 4 everythin

@ diamonds
well da poem is based on a true thing dat happened wit me wit a guy name julio but im through wit it

@ trina
true every1 does go through it sooner or later

@ n search of ecstacy
yea its a shame n da poem took me a while to make it but i also think it came out good

@ cj
bro thnkz 4 everythin

 

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